Scene 1 : It was 5:00 AM on Sunday and Manish could not sleep anymore. He was thinking about his future wife Arati . Manish dialed to reach Arati but the international circuits were all down due to severe weather impact. Not knowing what to do, he looked outside the window and the snow flurries were still ongoing. Manish came out of his apartment to take a brief look at the weather outside and saw his car totally filled with snow from last night. With a big huh, he went back into the Apartment. Mr.Coffee was ready with the coffee filled in the pot. Manish filled a cup of black coffee and grabbed some Mothers cookies in a plate. He swtiched on the TV to see the weather forecast for the rest of the week. Oh my god, he shouted knowing that heavy snow is just about to start and keep longing for another 4 days. Manish was not happy and he shut the TV instantly. He just finished his last sip of that Coffee and came out with Robotic outfit. He went near his car and noticed a little bit of red tone in the snow underneath his car. He started to clear off all the snow besides the tires and the roof. He opened the car and was shocked and terrified. A human body was cut all through and slammed inside the backset of his car. Manish could not stand the scene and came running back to the apartment, without even closing the doors of the car. He dialed 911 to inform the cops and explained the situation. After completing the call, he took another look up from his balcony and could not see clearly as the snow was falling heavy. Oh shit, i forgot to close the door, he realized and ran crazy towards the car. He closed the back door by turning his head back and while doing that he happened to glaze at the front seat. He immediately opened the front door and could not believe it. There was another body in the front which was not there when he first came to the car. This time the shock he had was severe that he fainted to the ground.
Scene 2 : In Next 5 minutes, the parking lots were filled with cop cars. Lots of alarm sound and the total community woke up. Every body in the community was curious to know what happened and walked towards the cops. The cops did not give any hint to people walking towards them . Rather, the cops announced in a big speaker that no one should leave their home. Please stay home. We are here today to track a murder case and we dont want anyone to panic. We will have the management keeping you posted about the proceeds. Dont inform any kids and let them not know about this. Again, i warn, dont come out in this heavy snow. Pleae stay home intact.
Scene 3 : The cops eneterted Manish's door and rang the calling bell. After 10 repeats, they entered his apartment with a bang. With gun pointed towards the front, they searched Manish's 2 bedroom apartment all through. Knowing that Manish is not inside, they video taped his complete apartment. They checked all his recorded voice messaged on phone. Without a tip, they came back to the parking lot and searched each and every car but the car that manish spotted was not there. Manish was also found missing. The cop raised a Heavy Red alarm signal to the community management and asked to have a patrol secure the place until they find a solution to the crime.
Scene 4: Next morning 7:00AM. The cops office was filled with lots of discussions. People were walking and talking. Faxes and print machines were all producing non-stop sounds. The phone was ringing all the time. The head cop was talking to the Apartment Management and gave an appointment to go over this crime. It was all set at 10:30 AM in the cops office.
Scene 5: People representing the managment came into the cops office and the discussion started exactly at 10:30 AM as scheduled. The cops asked a complete historical records of all the residents in the community. The management agreed to proivide that by end of the day. The management also hinted the cops that there were lots of muggings happening recently in the community.
Scene 6: The patrol securing the community called the cops around 10:00 PM and let them know that there are 2 black boys who are roaming constantly from 9:00 pm to 10:00 pm in a day. The patrol said to the cops that after they enquired those guys, they seem to be very erratic and careless guys. They also carried lots of cash in their wallets. The cops asked the patrol to have a deep watch on those guys.
Scene 7: Next morning 7:00 AM. Two indian families got mugged again in the same community and called the cops that they were robbed and beaten up by four guys. The situation became worse. The cops received the histroical records from the Managment and started reviewing the records of all the tentants who came in and went out. The pattern was hinting them soemthing. They found that out of 600 tenants so far, there were totally 200 Indian families, 100 American families and 300 Black families. But when they looked at currently living families, they noticed that out of 50 families that can be accomodated in the community. 30 were indians, 10 were Americans and 10 were Blacks. The ratio of blacks living in the community came down like 80%.
Scene 8: The cops went inside all the Indian families apartment and explained the situaion briefly. That night around 9:00 pm, Ramesh and Gaythri came out of the apartment and went near their car. Two guys pounced from behind and asked them to give whatever they have. Gayathri opened her handbag and when just about to give the cash to them, the patrol and the cops shot the 2 guys leg from far behind and walked towards Ramesh and Gayathri and appreciated them with "Well done guys".
Scene 9: The 2 guys were heavily interrogated at the cops office and the cops were all shocked to know that they have already killed 3 people. They wanted to know if Manish is alive and came to know that Manish is also dead. It was all due to the fact that the community was all Blacks and they were all living like happy families Once the indians came into existance, the management also realized the potential to make big money and raised the Rent consistantly for the past 6 years. Not able to pay these rent, the kids were suffering from paying the rent and paying for other expenses. The situation lead to crime and that lead to a never ending crime, explained those 2 boys. Asked about the other 2 guys, they said that they are our class mates who happened to move from this community long back because of the same problem. The cops put them all in jail and called the Management office.
Scene 10: The management called all the tenants and told what is the cause behind the murders. The terrified Indians all packed their bags and found a new community that did not have any such impact and aggitation from the crows.
Scene 2 : In Next 5 minutes, the parking lots were filled with cop cars. Lots of alarm sound and the total community woke up. Every body in the community was curious to know what happened and walked towards the cops. The cops did not give any hint to people walking towards them . Rather, the cops announced in a big speaker that no one should leave their home. Please stay home. We are here today to track a murder case and we dont want anyone to panic. We will have the management keeping you posted about the proceeds. Dont inform any kids and let them not know about this. Again, i warn, dont come out in this heavy snow. Pleae stay home intact.
Scene 3 : The cops eneterted Manish's door and rang the calling bell. After 10 repeats, they entered his apartment with a bang. With gun pointed towards the front, they searched Manish's 2 bedroom apartment all through. Knowing that Manish is not inside, they video taped his complete apartment. They checked all his recorded voice messaged on phone. Without a tip, they came back to the parking lot and searched each and every car but the car that manish spotted was not there. Manish was also found missing. The cop raised a Heavy Red alarm signal to the community management and asked to have a patrol secure the place until they find a solution to the crime.
Scene 4: Next morning 7:00AM. The cops office was filled with lots of discussions. People were walking and talking. Faxes and print machines were all producing non-stop sounds. The phone was ringing all the time. The head cop was talking to the Apartment Management and gave an appointment to go over this crime. It was all set at 10:30 AM in the cops office.
Scene 5: People representing the managment came into the cops office and the discussion started exactly at 10:30 AM as scheduled. The cops asked a complete historical records of all the residents in the community. The management agreed to proivide that by end of the day. The management also hinted the cops that there were lots of muggings happening recently in the community.
Scene 6: The patrol securing the community called the cops around 10:00 PM and let them know that there are 2 black boys who are roaming constantly from 9:00 pm to 10:00 pm in a day. The patrol said to the cops that after they enquired those guys, they seem to be very erratic and careless guys. They also carried lots of cash in their wallets. The cops asked the patrol to have a deep watch on those guys.
Scene 7: Next morning 7:00 AM. Two indian families got mugged again in the same community and called the cops that they were robbed and beaten up by four guys. The situation became worse. The cops received the histroical records from the Managment and started reviewing the records of all the tentants who came in and went out. The pattern was hinting them soemthing. They found that out of 600 tenants so far, there were totally 200 Indian families, 100 American families and 300 Black families. But when they looked at currently living families, they noticed that out of 50 families that can be accomodated in the community. 30 were indians, 10 were Americans and 10 were Blacks. The ratio of blacks living in the community came down like 80%.
Scene 8: The cops went inside all the Indian families apartment and explained the situaion briefly. That night around 9:00 pm, Ramesh and Gaythri came out of the apartment and went near their car. Two guys pounced from behind and asked them to give whatever they have. Gayathri opened her handbag and when just about to give the cash to them, the patrol and the cops shot the 2 guys leg from far behind and walked towards Ramesh and Gayathri and appreciated them with "Well done guys".
Scene 9: The 2 guys were heavily interrogated at the cops office and the cops were all shocked to know that they have already killed 3 people. They wanted to know if Manish is alive and came to know that Manish is also dead. It was all due to the fact that the community was all Blacks and they were all living like happy families Once the indians came into existance, the management also realized the potential to make big money and raised the Rent consistantly for the past 6 years. Not able to pay these rent, the kids were suffering from paying the rent and paying for other expenses. The situation lead to crime and that lead to a never ending crime, explained those 2 boys. Asked about the other 2 guys, they said that they are our class mates who happened to move from this community long back because of the same problem. The cops put them all in jail and called the Management office.
Scene 10: The management called all the tenants and told what is the cause behind the murders. The terrified Indians all packed their bags and found a new community that did not have any such impact and aggitation from the crows.
7 comments
First comment!!! Superb suspense.. nalla flow.. yappa.. ungala paarati paarati enakku bore adichidum pola.. overa kalakkareenga.. maamiya dhrushti suthi poda sollunga.. :)
Posted on 2:21 PM
@g3
bore adikkum alavukku paaraattu. kaekavae superaa irukkae :)
thanks a lot for reading the post g3. BTW does g3 => Gayathri?
Posted on 2:42 PM
100 mark :) G3 = Gayathriyae dhaan :)
Posted on 2:47 PM
Ivlo supera post ezhudhara ungalukku thaan naanga thanks sollanum.. neenga ennadanna padikkaradhukkellam thanks soldreenga?
Posted on 2:48 PM
ketkave romba horrible... unmaiyila nadanthatha ? I have seen people who have had really bad experiences from that community!
But, then, enna panrathu? etho tamil pesaram enbathalayum, srilankan tamil ganga nalayum, namma tamil community kitta (naan irukira idathil) othungi irupaanga!
Posted on 7:41 PM
@dreamz
unmail ellam illai. summa kadai daan idu :)
Posted on 8:45 PM
wow...superb n a nice flow which made us to keep the fingers across..nice and flawless work..
Posted on 9:13 PM