Scene 1:
It was early in the morning. Tom hears an object falling sound from around the living room. He gets the doubt that someone might have broke into the house. He gets up from the bed very slowly and stands near the bedroom door and puts his right ear very close to the door. The sound gets clearer and is very sure that someone is inside the house. He is thoroughly terrified and tries not to produce any small sound. He gently opens the door, inch by inch and with utmost fear steps out a little. There are 3 people in the living room searching for stuff and Tom stumbles a second. His brain cells are dead and nervous system collapses. He just doesn't have a clue to react that instance. He finally got the idea of calling the cop. But has no clue again, where the cell phone is. Luckily, he glazed the second bedroom and found it with ease. He rushed to pick the phone, only to find that there is no charge in it. His tension grows and hates himself for his absent mindedness. He realizes that the charger is in his first bedroom, where he first got up and rushes back to the bedroom, before anyone would come up stairs. With shivering hands, he clips the charger to his cell phone and calls the cop. The calling tone comes up and Tom stops the call immediately. He spans the settings and disables all the sounds in the cell phone and calls the cop again. He slowly moves inside the walk in closet and closes the door. With an husky voice, he talks to the cop, "3 people have broke into my house. Could you please come ASAP". The moment he ends the call, he hears the knocking sound on his bedroom door. He comes out of the closet and gets near the bedroom door. Just before opening the door, he shouts, "Please dont hurt me. Take anything you want". The voice from the other side says, "Dont worry. We have taken enough. Please come down and close the door. We are just about to leave before the cop comes". He slowly opens the door and takes a snapshot of all 3 faces. While stepping down the stairs, he notices a gun being placed on the show case and just before the 3 guys are about to step out, Tom yells at them , "Stop now. You guys have to wait till the cop is here". The 3 guys start laughing out loud and one of the guy puts his hand inside the long coat and realizes that he has kept the gun on the showcase. He gets close to Tom with a soft voice, "Tom. OK we will definitely stay here. Please stay calm". While the guy was approaching close to Tom, Tom gets the fear of being attacked and shoots him straight on his head. The 2 other guys try to run out and Tom chases them to knock them down in succession. The cop enters at the very same moment and consoles Tom that it is OK and those guys were in the Cop's list for a very long time.
Scene 2:
Tom goes for shopping inside a Mall and picks a dress during the Thanksgiving week end. He pays the bill and gets inside Starbucks for Cappucino. He Couldn't believe his eyes. The 3 guys were working for Starbucks and Tom is totally shocked. He faints instantly and creates panic in the shop. People are concerned if it is due to some coffee and what not. Seeing Tom, Dr. George with the help of fellow people, takes Tom to his newly opened Psychiatric consultation stall that is inside the Mall.
Scene 3:
Dr.George wakes Tom by spilling water on his face. Tom's eyes were swollen. He couldn't still come out from the fact of seeing those 3 guys. Dr.George with a soft voice, talks to him "I believe, your name is Tom. I saw your wallet and i'm sure now that you are disturbed with something terribly. I'm a psychiatrist and please let me know of anything you want to talk about. The conversation starts :
Tom : "Dr. I am having a severe problem of meeting all the people that i see in a dream. I recently had a dream of killing 3 people and it happens to be the 3 guys that work in that Starbucks shop. It always shocks me when many things like that happen".
Dr : "Well, when you say many things, what do you mean by that".
Tom : "I mean, i've always had many many dreams in my life and majority of them have come true. I dont know why it ends up to be true."
Dr : "Dreams are nothing but minds over reactive state. People who are stressed tend to get dreams. They always think about something. Their mind becomes floated and it starts pulling a shapshot of things we see in real life. It then takes a form with our current day scenarios and ties it out together. It is a miracle of such things happening and i've luckily treated tons of such cases like you. So, you should take that lightly.
Tom : Dr. I would have definitely taken that lightly but when weird things that i dream of comes true, it is certainly very hard.
Dr : Now, you got to let me know of what had happened so that i can help you more.
Tom : Dr, i always had a fantasy towards a girl living near my house. When i dreamt about her one day, she gets married to another guy in the street and i bad mouth about him in the entire street. Later next week, i find that guy dead and the reason that i believe is because of my bad mouthing him.
Dr : This is a stupid thinking Tom. People die for various reasons. There is no point in associating that with your dreams.
Tom : I know that. But it somehow ends being like that.
Dr : You've got severe problems Tom. You got to be admitted to my hospital very soon. I would be extremely happy to get you out of this.
Tom : Are you saying that i'm mad??
Dr : Well, you are not Tom. You are close to becoming one.
Tom : Bullshit. I dont want to go your hospital.
Dr : You have to Tom. You have to, if you want to be cured.
Tom : I better stay like this and i dont really care. Now leave me alone.
Dr : Tom, if you dont get admitted, i might call the police and let them know that its dangerous to leave you alone.
Tom : Tom gets a knife from the Dr's drawer and slits his throat. The entire Mall is horrified by the scene.
Scene 4 :
Dr : Hello Tom, you are in the 2nd day of your treatment for DreamOphobia. What you got to say today. Got any dream??
Tom : Not able to control his laugh, Tom says "I killed you today".
Dr : Woooo hooo. That seems to be an interesting one. Tom, you got to come in at 10:00 AM and lets get to the 2nd day treatment. DONT WORRY TOM. YOU WILL BE PERFECTLY OK in 30 days and you wont have any such horrifying dreams thats bothering you daily now. I bet you.
Tom : Thanks Dr. I hope for that day.
It was early in the morning. Tom hears an object falling sound from around the living room. He gets the doubt that someone might have broke into the house. He gets up from the bed very slowly and stands near the bedroom door and puts his right ear very close to the door. The sound gets clearer and is very sure that someone is inside the house. He is thoroughly terrified and tries not to produce any small sound. He gently opens the door, inch by inch and with utmost fear steps out a little. There are 3 people in the living room searching for stuff and Tom stumbles a second. His brain cells are dead and nervous system collapses. He just doesn't have a clue to react that instance. He finally got the idea of calling the cop. But has no clue again, where the cell phone is. Luckily, he glazed the second bedroom and found it with ease. He rushed to pick the phone, only to find that there is no charge in it. His tension grows and hates himself for his absent mindedness. He realizes that the charger is in his first bedroom, where he first got up and rushes back to the bedroom, before anyone would come up stairs. With shivering hands, he clips the charger to his cell phone and calls the cop. The calling tone comes up and Tom stops the call immediately. He spans the settings and disables all the sounds in the cell phone and calls the cop again. He slowly moves inside the walk in closet and closes the door. With an husky voice, he talks to the cop, "3 people have broke into my house. Could you please come ASAP". The moment he ends the call, he hears the knocking sound on his bedroom door. He comes out of the closet and gets near the bedroom door. Just before opening the door, he shouts, "Please dont hurt me. Take anything you want". The voice from the other side says, "Dont worry. We have taken enough. Please come down and close the door. We are just about to leave before the cop comes". He slowly opens the door and takes a snapshot of all 3 faces. While stepping down the stairs, he notices a gun being placed on the show case and just before the 3 guys are about to step out, Tom yells at them , "Stop now. You guys have to wait till the cop is here". The 3 guys start laughing out loud and one of the guy puts his hand inside the long coat and realizes that he has kept the gun on the showcase. He gets close to Tom with a soft voice, "Tom. OK we will definitely stay here. Please stay calm". While the guy was approaching close to Tom, Tom gets the fear of being attacked and shoots him straight on his head. The 2 other guys try to run out and Tom chases them to knock them down in succession. The cop enters at the very same moment and consoles Tom that it is OK and those guys were in the Cop's list for a very long time.
Scene 2:
Tom goes for shopping inside a Mall and picks a dress during the Thanksgiving week end. He pays the bill and gets inside Starbucks for Cappucino. He Couldn't believe his eyes. The 3 guys were working for Starbucks and Tom is totally shocked. He faints instantly and creates panic in the shop. People are concerned if it is due to some coffee and what not. Seeing Tom, Dr. George with the help of fellow people, takes Tom to his newly opened Psychiatric consultation stall that is inside the Mall.
Scene 3:
Dr.George wakes Tom by spilling water on his face. Tom's eyes were swollen. He couldn't still come out from the fact of seeing those 3 guys. Dr.George with a soft voice, talks to him "I believe, your name is Tom. I saw your wallet and i'm sure now that you are disturbed with something terribly. I'm a psychiatrist and please let me know of anything you want to talk about. The conversation starts :
Tom : "Dr. I am having a severe problem of meeting all the people that i see in a dream. I recently had a dream of killing 3 people and it happens to be the 3 guys that work in that Starbucks shop. It always shocks me when many things like that happen".
Dr : "Well, when you say many things, what do you mean by that".
Tom : "I mean, i've always had many many dreams in my life and majority of them have come true. I dont know why it ends up to be true."
Dr : "Dreams are nothing but minds over reactive state. People who are stressed tend to get dreams. They always think about something. Their mind becomes floated and it starts pulling a shapshot of things we see in real life. It then takes a form with our current day scenarios and ties it out together. It is a miracle of such things happening and i've luckily treated tons of such cases like you. So, you should take that lightly.
Tom : Dr. I would have definitely taken that lightly but when weird things that i dream of comes true, it is certainly very hard.
Dr : Now, you got to let me know of what had happened so that i can help you more.
Tom : Dr, i always had a fantasy towards a girl living near my house. When i dreamt about her one day, she gets married to another guy in the street and i bad mouth about him in the entire street. Later next week, i find that guy dead and the reason that i believe is because of my bad mouthing him.
Dr : This is a stupid thinking Tom. People die for various reasons. There is no point in associating that with your dreams.
Tom : I know that. But it somehow ends being like that.
Dr : You've got severe problems Tom. You got to be admitted to my hospital very soon. I would be extremely happy to get you out of this.
Tom : Are you saying that i'm mad??
Dr : Well, you are not Tom. You are close to becoming one.
Tom : Bullshit. I dont want to go your hospital.
Dr : You have to Tom. You have to, if you want to be cured.
Tom : I better stay like this and i dont really care. Now leave me alone.
Dr : Tom, if you dont get admitted, i might call the police and let them know that its dangerous to leave you alone.
Tom : Tom gets a knife from the Dr's drawer and slits his throat. The entire Mall is horrified by the scene.
Scene 4 :
Dr : Hello Tom, you are in the 2nd day of your treatment for DreamOphobia. What you got to say today. Got any dream??
Tom : Not able to control his laugh, Tom says "I killed you today".
Dr : Woooo hooo. That seems to be an interesting one. Tom, you got to come in at 10:00 AM and lets get to the 2nd day treatment. DONT WORRY TOM. YOU WILL BE PERFECTLY OK in 30 days and you wont have any such horrifying dreams thats bothering you daily now. I bet you.
Tom : Thanks Dr. I hope for that day.
16 comments
Naan inga commentu potta maadiri irundhudhey.. adhuvum kanavu dhaano :P
Back to story telling?? Thriller story super :D
ALL-IN-ALL-Azhagu raaja maadiri ALL ROUNDER-Kittu maamavo??? :D
Posted on 3:23 PM
aaramibikkum pothu ithu etho Tom & Jerry story pola nu paartha...thriller...but S.J.Surya maathiri konnen aana kollala apdinu mudichu irukeenga...soober... :-)
Posted on 3:34 PM
Attendance Maamu..
veetla poi reading..
appurama remaining comments
Posted on 6:05 PM
weekend padikkiren kittu :)
Posted on 11:04 PM
ore confusion..edhu dream edhu dream illa..night utkaandhu idha padichitu thoonganum nu nenacha bayamaa iruku :-p
Posted on 11:17 PM
Hahaha..That was a very nice post :) Actually Ur tamil posts are too good :) Tamil blog vecha enna? :>?
Posted on 12:16 AM
appada oru vazhiya vandhuten...vandhona padikum mudhal thriller, superunga...suntvla vara maadiri neenga heading kuduthirukkalam thigil vaaram apdinu...
maami eppadi irukanga kettenu sollunga...
Posted on 10:05 AM
ahaa! suspense thriller! SUPER!
Posted on 1:27 PM
kittu, suspense kadhai super! kalakareenga!
apparam, en saarba kmkku oru periya nanri sillidunga.. for her commentsi n my blog.. i really appreciated that :)
Posted on 1:28 PM
Super storry kittu... yetho goutham menon range'ku yosichu irukeenga nadula oru Bombay jayashree paatum pota nalla irukkum :)
Posted on 2:33 PM
literally scene poturkinga
kittu :-)
nalla thriller. kaalaila ezhundurchi indha page varuven.. indha comment irukkuma? :P
Posted on 11:39 PM
@g3
DankQ DankQ :-)
@syam
LOL. Appo Dr.George role la Naazer ku koduthadavaa :-)
@mu.ka
veetla poi padikkaraen solliyae pala thadava escape thala. haaa
@ms.conginality
welcome to my space miss. kozappamaa? apdi onnum perisa illayae indha story la :-)
@ponnarasi
thanks ponn. tamil blog vecha enna enraal eppadi solreenga? you mean dedicated tamil blog solreengala?
@ramya
vaanga ramya...chennai eppadi irukku...paravaala, oruvaziyya vandadhukku mikka nanri :-)
k.mami is doing good.
@dreamz
thanks dreamzz.. kmami kitta kandippaa sollidaraen :-)
@kk
hehe.. thanks kk...summa thatti vidardhu dhaanae idhellam :-)
@arun
veettukku poi thala maadhiri illaama correctaa padhichadhukku DankQ arun..
unga comment inga kandippaa irukkum :-)
Posted on 11:28 PM
ssspppa ippave kanna katuthee! storyla innoru twist vechu irukalam illa? btw romba nalla ezhuthi irukeenga! :p
//idha padichitu thoonganum nu nenacha bayamaa iruku //
@Ms.C, ummachi kumtutu thaachikka ponga madam! :p
Posted on 11:56 PM
//nadula oru Bombay jayashree paatum pota nalla irukkum //
screenplay change maa...Starbucks coffee la oru vettu kilaya paakraan Tom. Appo Mall'la suthiyae oru bombay jayashree paatu duet onnu parakkudhu...appuram back to Starbucks. ;-)
Posted on 3:48 PM
thriller pola oru kadhai.padichu mudikkum bodhu nan irupadhae kanavudhana nu sandhaegam vandhuduchu.;D
Posted on 11:27 AM
Tom & dreams nice,but u have created fear to have a dream.
Posted on 8:52 PM