Scene1 : Bruce comes out of the toilet and wears a night dress. He drinks couple of pegs of Rum and goes to bed. The clock is showing 11:00 PM, WEDNESDAY. The camera shifts with a rifty pace and with a slight distortion to show the next scene.
Scene2 : Bruce is filling an application for a Bank job . He comes back home and wants to get that job badly because of a very high package. He gets a call for the interview around 6:00 PM and is all excited. He practises wearing different costumes, talks about his own profile in front of the bathroom mirror and is getting prepared to literally make a mark in the interview, that is scheduled the next morning. He eats dinner and goes to sleep at 11:00 PM.
Scene3 : He has a long interview and is interviewed by kate. He gets to answer lots of personal questions and is also embarassed with the way kate is dressed. Kate offers Bruce the position of Mortgage Bond structurer and Bruce is all happy. He comes back home and calls his parents to share the good news and also orders a pan pizza from Pizza Hut for dinner. As usual, he sleeps at 11:00 PM
Scene4 : He thinks about Kate in his innerself and wants to badly talk to her. He gets up very early and catches the bus to go to work. He grabs a coffee from Dunkin donuts and gets into the Bank at 8:00 AM. He is well assisted by another person and is shown the office he is taking. He passes through kate's office and sneeks to see if she is already in. Not able to see her, he goes to take his seat. The phone rings and he picks up to answer. It is kate on the line and he answers, Yeah im already in and i'm all set with the office. Kate asks him to go through the client list that is on his table and make a note of all the valuable clients to the firm. She also keeps the phone saying that she would meet him by end of today. Bruce starts creating an email list of all those clients as per Kates intructions and sorts them out like bad and good.
Scene5: At 6:00 PM, Bruce is still hanging on at work to meet Kate. The phone rings and Kate speaks instantly, "I'm sorry Bruce. I made you wait. You should have gone home. I just got stuck with a client meeting. The office closes at 5:00 PM and i would definitely meet you in the morning. She keeps the phone asking how was his day."
Scene6 : Bruce takes the bus back and eats his dinner. He sees the voicemail and calls his parents again to answer that his day went very well and he's liking his job.
Scene7 : Bruce meets Kate while going to work and it so happens that Kate comes to Bruce's community to settle a deal. Kate also takes Bruce to the Landlord to talk about the proceeds and they both go back to work in the same car. Bruce could not believe its happening. The conversation begins and Bruce knows that Kate is single and is a successful person in her career. He wanted to prove something big at work and make Kate feel very happy. Reaching office, he collects the historical data about all the mortgage sellers and rates them. With the Due diligence done, he finds the loans that have been performing very well. He creates a new product and tries to structure a bond that would impress all the clients.
Scene8 : Next morning, he talks to all the clients and gets a firm relationship. He offers them with new investing ideas and everybody gets impressed. He arranges for a big meeting the next day and explains Kate about the whole deal. Kate very excited wants to go with Bruce for the meeting.
Scene9 : Bruce thinks about Kate again while going back on his bus and forgets to eat dinner at all. He looks at the clock and the moment it shows 11:00 PM, he jumps to the bed again. He dreams and kate is sleeping next to him, making love with him.
Scene10 : Kate picks up Bruce the next day and they go to attend the meeting. After successful outcome of the meeting, they plan on going for lunch together. Bruce without hesitation proposes to Kate that he wants to marry her. Kate feeling happy about it and knowing that Bruce is a very smart person, accepts it with a sweet smile.
Scene11 : Bruce as he wanted, gets married to Kate in a grand fashion. He also wanted to start family with a New Home/Car. Both being a mortgage specialist, finds a home of their dream and a nice car. While coming back home in the new car, they get hit by a big truck on the freeway and both die.
Scene12 : The Alarm rings at 7:00 AM and Bruce gets up to stop it. He holds his head very tight and walks to the bathroom fast and vomits. He comes back to the living room and tears off the calendar sheet, which now reads THURSDAY .
Scene13 : Bruce gets ready and enters a bank to apply for a job.
Scene2 : Bruce is filling an application for a Bank job . He comes back home and wants to get that job badly because of a very high package. He gets a call for the interview around 6:00 PM and is all excited. He practises wearing different costumes, talks about his own profile in front of the bathroom mirror and is getting prepared to literally make a mark in the interview, that is scheduled the next morning. He eats dinner and goes to sleep at 11:00 PM.
Scene3 : He has a long interview and is interviewed by kate. He gets to answer lots of personal questions and is also embarassed with the way kate is dressed. Kate offers Bruce the position of Mortgage Bond structurer and Bruce is all happy. He comes back home and calls his parents to share the good news and also orders a pan pizza from Pizza Hut for dinner. As usual, he sleeps at 11:00 PM
Scene4 : He thinks about Kate in his innerself and wants to badly talk to her. He gets up very early and catches the bus to go to work. He grabs a coffee from Dunkin donuts and gets into the Bank at 8:00 AM. He is well assisted by another person and is shown the office he is taking. He passes through kate's office and sneeks to see if she is already in. Not able to see her, he goes to take his seat. The phone rings and he picks up to answer. It is kate on the line and he answers, Yeah im already in and i'm all set with the office. Kate asks him to go through the client list that is on his table and make a note of all the valuable clients to the firm. She also keeps the phone saying that she would meet him by end of today. Bruce starts creating an email list of all those clients as per Kates intructions and sorts them out like bad and good.
Scene5: At 6:00 PM, Bruce is still hanging on at work to meet Kate. The phone rings and Kate speaks instantly, "I'm sorry Bruce. I made you wait. You should have gone home. I just got stuck with a client meeting. The office closes at 5:00 PM and i would definitely meet you in the morning. She keeps the phone asking how was his day."
Scene6 : Bruce takes the bus back and eats his dinner. He sees the voicemail and calls his parents again to answer that his day went very well and he's liking his job.
Scene7 : Bruce meets Kate while going to work and it so happens that Kate comes to Bruce's community to settle a deal. Kate also takes Bruce to the Landlord to talk about the proceeds and they both go back to work in the same car. Bruce could not believe its happening. The conversation begins and Bruce knows that Kate is single and is a successful person in her career. He wanted to prove something big at work and make Kate feel very happy. Reaching office, he collects the historical data about all the mortgage sellers and rates them. With the Due diligence done, he finds the loans that have been performing very well. He creates a new product and tries to structure a bond that would impress all the clients.
Scene8 : Next morning, he talks to all the clients and gets a firm relationship. He offers them with new investing ideas and everybody gets impressed. He arranges for a big meeting the next day and explains Kate about the whole deal. Kate very excited wants to go with Bruce for the meeting.
Scene9 : Bruce thinks about Kate again while going back on his bus and forgets to eat dinner at all. He looks at the clock and the moment it shows 11:00 PM, he jumps to the bed again. He dreams and kate is sleeping next to him, making love with him.
Scene10 : Kate picks up Bruce the next day and they go to attend the meeting. After successful outcome of the meeting, they plan on going for lunch together. Bruce without hesitation proposes to Kate that he wants to marry her. Kate feeling happy about it and knowing that Bruce is a very smart person, accepts it with a sweet smile.
Scene11 : Bruce as he wanted, gets married to Kate in a grand fashion. He also wanted to start family with a New Home/Car. Both being a mortgage specialist, finds a home of their dream and a nice car. While coming back home in the new car, they get hit by a big truck on the freeway and both die.
Scene12 : The Alarm rings at 7:00 AM and Bruce gets up to stop it. He holds his head very tight and walks to the bathroom fast and vomits. He comes back to the living room and tears off the calendar sheet, which now reads THURSDAY .
Scene13 : Bruce gets ready and enters a bank to apply for a job.
4 comments
Good twist and good narration da...
Posted on 5:07 AM
Ellaam namba Iravu Shayamalan inspiration daan machi..
Posted on 9:07 AM
yedho twsit irukkumnu nenachen, adna idha guess pannala:)
good one
keep them coming
Posted on 4:32 AM
konnutenga! sema turn kadaisela. Nejama adu kanavunu expect panala.. nala ezhudhirkenga.
Posted on 8:05 AM